The video "energy conservation is Key", is about a girl named Madison, intervewed to the U.S Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) administrator called Lisa Jackson.
Madison asked Lisa about what U.S is doing to protect the environment, in this critical situation that the world is living with the contamination and other serious problems with the environment.
Madison asked Lisa about what U.S is doing to protect the environment, in this critical situation that the world is living with the contamination and other serious problems with the environment.
Opinion:
I think that all the things U.S government is doing are essential nevertheless they are so simple and there are more important aspects with the ones we can help to solve this serious problem with the environment.
Remember you can also help!!
If you want to see the video, it is in this page:
http://www2.scholastic.com/browse/scholasticNews.jsp?FromBrowseMod=true&Ns=Pub_Date_Sort%7C1&CurrPage=scholasticNews.jsp&TopicValue=Scholastic%20News
I think that all the things U.S government is doing are essential nevertheless they are so simple and there are more important aspects with the ones we can help to solve this serious problem with the environment.
Remember you can also help!!
If you want to see the video, it is in this page:
http://www2.scholastic.com/browse/scholasticNews.jsp?FromBrowseMod=true&Ns=Pub_Date_Sort%7C1&CurrPage=scholasticNews.jsp&TopicValue=Scholastic%20News
hi ade i think your resume is good but it has some P marks missing.
ReplyDeleteyour opinion is right but i think yuo need to correct the P marks.
ADE: NICE TEXT AND YOU SAID THE MAIN IDEA OF THE VIDEO ,GOOD!!YOUR SPELLING IS VERY WELL BUT I DON'T FOUND ANY PUNCTUATION MISTAKE , AND IS WELL STRUCTURED. YOUR OPINION IS WELL YOU CAN WRITE MORE IN YOUR OWN WORDS AND NICE PICTURE.!!! GOOD JOB!
ReplyDeleteAde:
ReplyDeleteI also agree with youl, we can also help the planet as the E.P.A your oppinion is very complete and I agrre with most of it.
The text is well wrote but you have some problems with punctuation and conjugation of verbs .
The text is organized and clear.
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anama.
ade your text is very nice and those colors make it look very nice
ReplyDeleteatt : lala =)
ade: your text is very nice and very good structured..!!!congrats.............................
ReplyDeleteAdelaida:
ReplyDeleteYur text is great, it has good spelling, and has few mistakes.
I agree wit your opinion.