Hi again, today I am going to talk you about my favorite city that is Bogotá.
This marvelous city has 3 things that I love and I think other cities are sad because they don’t have them.
The first place is “Monserrate”, it has a very, very beautiful view from its top were an important church is find.
The next, are all the museums that show us all the history and traditions of an old Bogotá. One of all this museums, and I think the most important, is “El Museo Del Oro”, in this place, people can see all unique and special things that old Bogotá people made in a material name gold.
The third and last place is “La Candelaria”, a place with many historic events that conserve its style.
These places are some of the many reasons that I like this city: Bogotá.
I’m sure you will like to visit this places and specially this city.
This marvelous city has 3 things that I love and I think other cities are sad because they don’t have them.
The first place is “Monserrate”, it has a very, very beautiful view from its top were an important church is find.
The next, are all the museums that show us all the history and traditions of an old Bogotá. One of all this museums, and I think the most important, is “El Museo Del Oro”, in this place, people can see all unique and special things that old Bogotá people made in a material name gold.
The third and last place is “La Candelaria”, a place with many historic events that conserve its style.
These places are some of the many reasons that I like this city: Bogotá.
I’m sure you will like to visit this places and specially this city.
Adelaida
Ade,your text is nice, coherent,and well structurated.Itmisses a litle bit of order.well done congrats!!!!
ReplyDeleteAde, I enjoy your text, and also like the city and this places.
ReplyDeleteYour text is coherent, with good punctuation and capitalization.
I suggest you put a photo and it is a little beet disorganized, but it is very well.
Good Work!!
hi ade your text is very nice i think you can put alittle more of informationabout the candelaria
ReplyDeleteAde :
ReplyDeleteyoue text is coherent and and very well wroten,its a little bit desorganized be carefull.
hi ade
ReplyDeleteIt is a very good description !!!
You telled all important places of Bogotá!!
Great job!!
Hi nd thank you for comment me.
ReplyDeleteI am going to take acount the org. so my other texts are better.
Dany, about la Candelaria I didnt put more info. because we were going to have the trip there at the next day!!
Thank you again and bye.
the text is good but the many different colos tire my eyes.
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